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The Pyramids of Giza are know by there three main pyramids the pyramids are made
out of ancient rooks and limestone Granite Egypt. It is the oldest of the Seven Wonders of the Ancient World, andthe only one to remain largely intact.
Hi Cruz it's me Mark from South Hornby School, I like how you worked hard on your Information Report and I remembered back when our teacher Mr. Breach told us to do an Information Report and I really enjoyed that Activity. But Maybe you could change "mane" to "main" just to make your spelling right but I still like your Information Report.
Hi Cruz its Jacob from South Hornby school. I like how you describe what it is made of. Maybe next time you could you could put some facts in. Would you like to go to Egypt for a trip?
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Hi Cruz it's me Mark from South Hornby School, I like how you worked hard on your Information Report and I remembered back when our teacher Mr. Breach told us to do an Information Report and I really enjoyed that Activity.
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Hi Cruz its Jacob from South Hornby school. I like how you describe what it is made of. Maybe next time you could you could put some facts in. Would you like to go to Egypt for a trip?
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